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At first you told me you were merely curious,
You told me not to worry,
You told me not to get jealous,
You told me I was the only one that mattered to you,
You were right at first,
You began to spend more and more time away,
I worried but didn't say,
I was jealous but hid it,
I slowly descended from your heart,
She slowly ascended to it,
At first you told me you were merely curious,
At the end you tell me you were wrong.
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idk just something I whipped up randomly i consider it decent at best opinions are welcome
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Conveys a sense of grave danger, deceit and false love. I LOVE IT.
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:icongreenroses12:
I can appreciate this "whipped up" poem as I tend to do that myself. It is good and I like it. It would be good to see what you can do with planning.
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:iconattemptingartist:
Thank you :) And maybe In the future in general I do whipped up style I am working on one right now its long but I only have part done so far but I am planning out thoroughly and trying to make it one of my best. Hope you enjoy it when I finish and post. :)
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~Sano-Balron Sep 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Very emotional and effective. :+fav:!
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